OUIL403- Day on the life Final Product Evaluation.

The Background could have been less streaky.

Needs better control over the consistency of line work. 

Lot of contrasting views of work however some valid points about image clarity and visible pencil work need to be addressed in evaluation. 

Evaluation

I always tend to have an issue with creating a clean cut final piece. It is reflected heavily in the last brief and this one where there have been pencil lines still and unclear line work. It is something I am going to looking to improve in the next brief.

I also have an issue with assuming people will understand the symbols used in this work, however people have commented that there was a difficulty under standing the concept that the masks stand for the idea of anonymity. When creating concepts and symbols it's important that I ask a variety of other people if they understand what it mens rather than assuming that people know what I am thinking about.

There was also some issues with the colours being to bold and clashing, though some others said that the colours helped the piece stand out. It may be good to look at using  more slightly muted tones as looking at the way colours can effect the way people receive an image.